Musings from a would-be author.
Hmm, sounds a little messy, but I really like the 'bruise' word choice, and 'poisoned sky,' and, wait a minute, does the mixed metaphor taint this passage or enhance it?
Hmm, sounds a little messy, but I really like the 'bruise' word choice, and 'poisoned sky,' and, wait a minute, does the mixed metaphor taint this passage or enhance it?
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